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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
It's a feeling of emptiness, That won't go away, Playing with your emotions, Day after day. It's standing in a room, Not knowing where to sit, Worrying that where you do, You simply just won't fit. It's a feeling which you can't escape, However hard you try, And the longer that it lasts for, The more you want to cry. It's counting minutes go slowly by, Because you've nothing else to do, But sit and watch others laugh, And wish that you could too. *Jennifer |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
do you really feel like this? but either way im here as you are here for me.. but i hope you keep write it is a great way to express and talk keep it up~!!! <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great but i hope you are ok.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
There is a duplicate poem with replies in the following thread. I'll lock this one to avoid confusion so others can respond in the first poem instead.  /pip/Forum36/HTML/002760.html [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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