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Age Doesn't Matter
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Age Doesn't Matter |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Sorry for this poor attempted at poetry. I just have no real motive to write about lately. ~¤ Age Doesn't Matter ¤~ I know your getting old And some say you grew ugly I tell them they are wrong And that I am very lucky When we go out in public People point and stare But no matter what happens You are always there Just 'cause you got older Doesn't mean that I don't care I love you lucky hat, For the memories that we share "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Ohh good one Isgona!!!Really creative...Keep it up buddy!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
that was really cool...for a second there I thought you were talking about a real person. Very creative, keep writing!! Luv, ~*~Priscilla~*~ ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Unique and creative Isgona ... you had me thinking it was a person at first too, I enjoyed this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I definitly thought this was about a person too! Great job of writing this, I like how you did it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
hmmm... I'm suprised this got any replies. I tried to be creative but I thaught the results were kinda lame. It really won't hurt my feelings if you think so too. just be nice to the hat... I really love this hat. I've had it since I can remember. it's the greatest hat a person could ask for. lol Thanks again for the replies every one. much apreciated IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Hi, IsGona! Great poem... The only thing: dont cut down your own poetry! Especially with work like this. No poetry is ever bad! Everyone has their own way of writing, and that way is never bad  ) Good work!*Jennifer |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
~Tears of Galss~ Thanks for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it. but.. hmmmm... I disagree. Not all poetry is good. Worthwhile.. maybe. But sometimes I write things I don't like. If I write something from the bottom of my heart and it's no good than it's no good. It's not a big deal. Anyhow I think I'm rambling Thanks Again IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey this was amazing. I loved the message and idea in this poem. Keep the hat, forget the people.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
When I finished reading this, I got a picture in my head of you dancing with your hat...lol...it was great. ~Carly |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Awww, you wrote bout your hat?? How cute. It's okay that it's old...this was very creative Jay...lovin it. Jenn "If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie.. beside you as you dream, if my heart had wings." Faith Hill |
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