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Careful What You Wish For |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I told you that i loved you, But i dont know if thats so true. How can u love someone, Who makes you feel so blue? When i told you those words, With tears trickleing from my eyes, I never thought i'd be saying this, But i think i told a lie. You see, Now i'm not shur if i love you. I really thought i did. Nothing could convince me otherwise. Your my main reason to live. So i said those words, Without an ounce of doubt. Well look at me now, Look how it turned out. Ever since that day, I've been nothing but confused. Everything from sad, happy, Smothered and used. So im not so shur n e more, If the words were just a lie. If i truely meant them, And if i did, why? I have to figure it out soon, Cause you have to be careful what you wish. You see i wished for you, Now im not so shur if i wished those words cross my lips. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
These feelings can be really confusing. I know how you feel. I hope that you figure things out soon. Best of luck! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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sweetstuff101 Member
since 2000-07-27
Posts 375OK, USA |
I know how confused you feel. I really don't know what to say. But I think your poem was excellent! It flowed well!! Great job, keep writing!!! Much Luv, ~*~SweetStuff~*~< !signature--> ~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~ [This message has been edited by sweetstuff101 (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow this is great.. it almost made me cry, i have been here too.. good luck with whatever happens though ~*Pixie*~ |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
oh no Michele!!! Whats goin on? Girl you need to update me! I thought everything was going so well?? Geez im worried now *dq ¤Sometimes the hardest thing to get over, is something you never really had¤ |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thank you everyone for your replies!!!! It definately is very confusing but what is meant to be...will be...thats all im thinking right now..thanks for reading  |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
This was a great poem. I'm sorry to hear that you have to go through this. This poem really made me think. Great job(as always!)! God Bless, - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I hope you figure things out soon! Your poem was done well, I think it's really good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I coulda sworn i've read this before.....odd. great nonetheless!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Did you step into my life or something? Scary. Needless to say, I know exactly what you feel. Awesome way to write it out. Keep writing!  ~*Skyfire *~Always Canadian*~ ~*~I used to be an idiot, but I'm all right now~*~ |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
this is beautiful. to tell you the truth, right now i really don't know what to say. I do hope you find answers though. thanks for the wonderful read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
great post i hope all gets better good luck and best wishes ~JDR "Most people are other people. Their thoughts are someone else's opinions, their lives a mimicry, their passions a quotation." -Oscar Wilde |
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Melster Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 442Brisbane, Qld, Australia |
You are right... we have to be careful for what we wish for as you have discovered... because when we get it, it may just well be what we don't want... I have been there myself... love is such a strong emotion that it is hard to know when we feel it... Good Luck, if ya need ANYTHING I will be here!! Melz!! Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
WOWWIE, this was an AWESOME poem! Great job!! |
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Rydr16 New Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 5 |
very good poem, i liked it alot i know how u feel, and with me, once i say i love you, i dont wanna walk away, my boyfriend pointed out to me , im afraid to be alone. hope you get things figured out -dee |
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