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Through the night |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
Through The Night You sit in such a peaceful state, Your loving smile works like bait, You've caught my eye and my heart, I almost die when we're apart.I can't explain what I am feeling, I don't understand the cards you are dealing, All I know is that it always feels right, Being in your arms all through the night. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` i just wanted to thank all you guys for reading my peoms and telling me your words and thoughts on them it means alot .. well to me it does anyways thanks again <3Andrea ~luvs~ Anthony,<3 You only live once so live it to the fullest.. Love comes and goes but friends stay for ever~!~!~!~!~! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is incredibly sweet. Well done, and what a nice thing to say at the end too! You're also greatly appreciated.  *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
"Your loving smile works like bait" This was my fav line Nice poem IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The length of this makes your words seem more powerful to me, nice job on the poem  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
It seems you write only about this one dude. Anyway i liked these love poems they are sweet. This one especially. VERY well written.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
Its very romantic. I like the "being in your arms all night part." Very loving and meaningful.   |
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