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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
For You I wanted to be something special, I want to be someone special to you, For you. Something interesting for your hands to explore, Someone with a sweet melody for your ears to hear, Something beautiful for your eyes to see. And when you kiss me And when you hold my hand And when you simply touch me, I begin to feel something, I start to feel worth it, That if someone like you, Who is so special, Something so interesting for my hands to explore, Someone with such a sweet melody for my ears to hear, Something so beautiful for my eyes to see Will even look my way, Perhaps I could be something, Perhaps I am someone. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
"Perhaps I am someone" Of course you are. Great poem. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this one expresses your feelings very well, I like it. nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the poem but i think you're a somebody regardless. But anyway good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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