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jytree
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0 posted 2000-12-08 10:58 AM


All the year,
And through the tear,
I have wait for it to come true,
I waited for a special that I could say I love you,
Girl I thought you were everything to me,
But now all you do is sit and watch me bleed,

For all the things you could have done,
I surely wish you had used the gun,
To take away all the misery that you caused,

Girl wasn't it enough that you took my heart and ripped it apart,
And now you have the nerve to say I don't have a heart!.
You best open you eyes before its to late,
I just pray you do it before the final date.

YOu did more harm you could ever dreamed,
But I lived through it all or so it seems,

Girl I think it is sad when you called me your friend,
And then pledged you love for me is without end.
But apperently you found it surprise, surprise,
My first clue is when you started seeing other guys.

Girl for so long I tried protectin you,
But this is my thank your a fool,
I really thank God your not me wife,
Because to get a divorce you would use a knife.
And you think your a good friend and I right?,

I don't think so,
When you broke up with me it felt like being thrown through 30 glass windows,
YOu are bad friend,
Man you suck,
I am really go to tell,
Woman take you r pimps and go to he-doble-hokey-sticks.


Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born


© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-12-08 04:57 PM


I like how you used an attititude in this poem, nice job   

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Dazed_and_Confused
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since 2000-12-04
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2 posted 2000-12-08 08:13 PM


That girl is such a bad friend!(well obiestly) You truely deserve someone who will treat you right. I'm here in the forms for ya if ya need someone to talk to.



Dopey Dope
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3 posted 2000-12-08 08:18 PM


Hey this was a great poem. I thought one of the replies was funny. The one above this one. It was funny cuz in the parenthesis it looked like she said obesity...like the girl was being a bad friend cuz of obesity. Yea ok im stupid like that.
Anyway good job!



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