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Love's Balance
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Love's Balance |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: blah Love's Balance: There you are starring the moon down. Magnifying your own existance. Trying to make everything back away, And smirking at a job well done. Here I am bleeding to life. Simplifying my very self being. Wondering if i'll ever make it, And crying at another missed chance. Together we make the perfect couple. Balancing each other out completely. Knowing that without one the other is not whole, And kissing with the sense of eternity.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"Here I am bleeding to life." Ahhhhhh!!!!!!!, your words are attacking my mind, filling it with thoughts, and other odd stuff. Why the blah? Huh? I thought it was good. And congrats on 2000 posts! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Oposites attract... That's what they say anyhow. Maybe you just explained why. keep 'em coming. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Hallie_Angel Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 102 |
Good Poem! Thank you again for helping me Dopey! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Here I am bleeding to life. Simplifying my very self being." "Knowing that without one the other is not whole, And kissing with the sense of eternity." No "blah" here at all Javier ... wonderful expression in this emotion-filled piece, great description!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
 j/k amigo I thought you poem was <---Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
j/k amigo I thought you poem was <---Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Trying to make everything back away... Wondering if i'll ever make it... And kissing with the sense of eternity... ============================================ DD, I enjoyed this... From the struggle of heartache and the kiss of romantic bliss you have me smiling at this splendid write of your's... coco |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, odd enough you all replied and liked it. I don't, but i guess thats besides the point. Thanks to all of you! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
its great,definatly not a "blah"..well what do I know.. Regina |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Any expression of emotion is NOT blah! (Well, OK, maybe some are. But this wasn't one of them! )[This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 12-08-2000).] |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Well i see you have a few poem and well you reply to mine so im returning the favor.....good writting here i really liked it a lot and well i would like to say keep up the good writting but what i really want to say is NEVER stop the great writting! ~BrandenBear~ "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Fearless_Angel Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 57Calgary, AB Canada |
Hey Dopey_Dope: Well, I havne't been on for a while, but I've obviously missed a lot of good work from you. That was a very good poem. Keep up the good work and well hope to talk to you soon aiight? Wellz, gots to bounce now, Buh bye! Lotsa Love, Angel xoxoxo "Take care and remember that a certain innocent lil' Angel will alwayz be there for you..." |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
definately not a "blah" piece! this was great, you amaze me every time... with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace love is friendship set on fire... now, if only it were free to ignite... |
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