Teen Poetry #3 |
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My School....... |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
My school isn't the same as everybody's..... We ae in different units, people have their owns or you share, nurses are there helping you. We eat breakfast get ready a half hour we eat lunch go hang out we eat dinner go hang out. I see people lost in their worlds they don't know why they are there some cry, some scream. School is different you hear kids screaming you hear them in pain. They are lost I don't know how to help the little kids look up to us. I think they need help ~Min~ If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Wow, Min. This really touched me..They do need help...Dang, the world needs more people just like you... |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
i agree 100% with child of the stars wow. we do need plenty more ppl like you and well if we cant do stuff correct then how are the younger kids gonna? We are the future and we need to be role modles. thanks now ill look at things different "put the name of the person u love, not in a heart because they alway break but put it in a circle which last forever" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This poem is expressed really well, good job ![]() "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
i'm glad i insiperd you. oh branden, and child of the stars i enjoy being your friendthanks for being my frined. i guess 1 poem makes people think differently! Bye minna ![]() If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hey....this kinda confused me. what kinda school is this? I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna --- i probably haven't read all your poems, but for some reason, the ones i have read have touched me so much. You have inspired me with the strength that you have shown in your poems. I too should look up to you to find strength from within me. thanks so much for sharing your poems ![]() I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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