¤/How the Winter Pleases/¤

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Teen Poetry #3

¤/How the Winter Pleases/¤

Suga_Baby
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since 2000-08-06

Posts 380
Maine, USA

0 posted 2000-12-07 06:02 PM

How the Winter Pleases

Snowflakes swirling to the ground
Dancing and fluttering about
Settling down in infinite billions
Their beauty one cannot doubt

Icicles suspended from white rooftops
Clear and shiny in form
Sparkling in the light of day
Another benefit of a storm

Snow-capped mountains distant
Gracefully blanketed hill nearby
Children get out their sleds to play
No sooner than the snow begins to fly

Glittery trees all dusted with snow
Dance and sway in brisk breezes
Harmoniously with the floating snowflakes
And this is how the winter pleases.

Hallie_Angel
Member

since 2000-12-06

Posts 102

1 posted 2000-12-07 06:07 PM

Wow,
Cool Poem! I feel cold.

Can you please tell me how I can post a poem too? Anyone?

Catherine!!!

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-12-07 06:42 PM

Hallie, NEW TOPIC.

Anyway the poem was a magical one. It put those cold shivers throughout my body. Not the warm fuzzies cuz this poem is cold. BRRRrrrrrrrrrrrr

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

3 posted 2000-12-07 08:45 PM

I love winter, and I love your poem! Nice job of capturing the season

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
http://www.thehungersite.com

IsGona
Senior Member

since 2000-07-14

Posts 723

4 posted 2000-12-07 09:53 PM

Well... unlike lake I hate winter, but your poem is pretty good. you make it sound not so bad... even though winter sucks in my opinion. Anyway... I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing
IsGona

"Every body has their destiny...
I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
~Hatebreed~

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2000-12-08 07:40 AM

Beautiful description Suga_Baby! You've captured such wonderful imagery in this poem ... just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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