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Tamma
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0 posted 2000-12-07 05:51 PM



This was written for everyone in my class at JRTI. I know we've had problems and its getting old FAST.

First you’re my friend,
Then you’re not.
Words were said,
Tears have been shed.
We grow close,
Then drift apart.
Things have happened,
Things we can’t take back.
We need to leave it in the past,
And continue with out lives.
People like to talk,
And hurt someone else.
We’re all different,
In our own way.
We need to appreciate,
These differences in each other.



“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

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1 posted 2000-12-07 05:54 PM


Hey,
Good-Job. Tobad not all people think that our diferences are beautiful. If by any chance you could tell me how I submit a poem I would like that very much! Have a wonderful evening!

                           Catherine!!!

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2 posted 2000-12-07 06:07 PM


There are a lot of 2-faced people in the world. You describe it well. We should all just try to get along! Thanks for sharing!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



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3 posted 2000-12-07 06:33 PM


This was another great message. I really liked it. Hypocrits really make me grit my teeth. I just want to lash out my tongue like a lizard, wrap it around them, and strangle them until they reform their ways.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


Tamma
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4 posted 2000-12-07 06:37 PM


ummm...Dopey I dont know to thank you, or run far, far away from you.

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


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5 posted 2000-12-07 06:42 PM


God, I don't miss that! People can be so hypocritical. Since I graduated from High School I have found that these problems virtually disappear. High School breeds and wallows in these ignorant ways. When you're out, you know who your REAL friends are, most of the time. Great poem, and I hope you can find a solution.
                                          Jon

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6 posted 2000-12-07 08:42 PM


It must be a common thing in high schools everywhere!!! I hate it too and believe me my school has its fair share of what you speak of...Great poem!
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7 posted 2000-12-07 09:12 PM


Great job of writing of this, it's very good!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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8 posted 2000-12-07 11:31 PM


I hated it when that happened with me. Thank god its over though. Good way to describe what you are thinking or actually going through.

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

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9 posted 2000-12-08 08:08 AM


The funny thing is
that when I let my
teacher read this,
She told me to print
it up and laminate it.
Well, I did, and now
it's hanging on the
bulletin board in the
back of the room  

~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~


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~*~ Tamma ~*~

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