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Teen Poetry #3

every morning

sherm
Member

since 2000-07-21

Posts 94
Evansville,IN

0 posted 2000-12-07 11:13 AM

i could wake up every morning
to see your beautiful face
and want nothing more
never want to go
to anyother place
my eyes would never get sore
and my love would only grow

my legs would freeze
and my body wouldnt move
id lay there all day long
just to stare into your eyes
with nothing to ever prove
because nothing would ever go wrong
my life would be free of cries
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Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not

[This message has been edited by sherm (edited 12-07-2000).]

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-12-07 04:18 PM

I like how this is done, it seemed to have a good impact on my thoughts. Nice job

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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-12-07 07:06 PM

This was great. I really liked this and i surely hope that you post more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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