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apsara
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0 posted 2000-12-07 10:27 AM


Thoughts

Hateful were they, demons in my head
Every thought in mind they had read
Stripped me of every faith and dream
They bore witness to my fearful screams

Unable to do anything, helpless as an infant
Through my mind, they ran rampant
Whispering thoughts of betrayal and treason
In every waking moment of each season

Infectious these thoughts proved to be
Listening at last it all seemed right to me
But it brought only pain and disaster
I understand now that its me they're after

Help I'll find to get away from here
Help I'll find to deal with my fear
I'll get rid of them till finally I see
That the only screams belong to them, not me



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Lakewalker
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1 posted 2000-12-07 04:15 PM


Don't let these thoughts control you, you have to control them.  Nice job on the poem!

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Dopey Dope
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2 posted 2000-12-07 07:02 PM


Well easier said than done lake......
anyway lake is right but you'll have to harness them somehow.......yoga maybe? hehe

Anyway great poem!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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