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heart filled promises |
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Andrea4writes Junior Member
since 2000-12-03
Posts 31Fayetteville, NC USA |
The feeling is unbearable with out you near so ill just close your eyes and pretend that you are here you're so close yet so far away i need you know what can i say? THe pleasures of love bring on the lonliness bouts though the tortures stay my heart remains without a doubt as time ticks away the shorter it seems that ill hold you here sadness overcomes me ill forever save this love so true no matter the future my heart goes with you if another shall be found ill stay my distance away but my heart and soul filled with you will stay forever my love forever so true my heart filled promises i will be waiting for you |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Welcome to Passions! This was a wonderful first post. I surely do hope that this person does come back and so on. Good luck and keep on posting. Looking forward to see more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Welcome Hope your stay is long and enjoyable. Great first poem Keep 'em coming IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
 Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy it here! You poem is really good, you should post some more for us to see. And be sure to reply to some poems too  < !signature-->"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hi there! Welcome to this wonderful world. This was a really great poem. I enjoyed reading it, and I hope you enjoy everyone elses stuff too! ~Carly [This message has been edited by Child of the Stars (edited 12-04-2000).] |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Great poem. Im so glad to see so much talent flowing through here! Anyways I hope to see more from you! Deano "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! What a wonderful first post. it's nice to see new members coming in. I hope you enjoy your stay at the same I actually hope you do stay  A lot of feelings are being poured out in your poem which makes is so good. Thanks for the read. And keep sharing  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! This was an incredible first post!!!! It was also so sweet I cant wait to see more!!!! Welcome again!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Andrea! We are very happy you have decided to join our community of poetry friendship! This is a wonderful first post ... so full of emotion, and nicely expressed. I hope to read more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (check your e-mail for a special message) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Just had to say "WELCOME TO PASSIONS" I'm sure You'll love it here, just like I do. "I'm an Angel! Honest! The horns are just up there to keep the halo straight!!" ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ “Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.” ~Me |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice first post. I hope to see more soon. Welcome to Passions! Jon |
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