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An Angel Sings
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An Angel Sings |
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Angel christmas New Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 6 |
saw you from across the street lookt into your eyes saw an angel fly you turned and smiled at me and I felt something in my heart caoudn´t move was paralized by my sensuality of love for the heart who makes me fly without wings to a place where an angel sings the songs of love abd that angel is you So sprette your wings and fly and let your love shine from high above out across the morning sky I can not hide it anymore my hrart will stanf still untill somebody opens the door for the heart who makes me fly without wings to a place where an angel sings the songs of love abd that angel is you Yours faithfully brian |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem but there's a lot of spelling errors.......just thought that might help in the future flow of your poems. The content of the poem was great though and i hope to read more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
for some reason...it reminded me of a christmas angel...i dont know... ummm...it was good.. Regina aka Ina |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I was distracted by the spelling and probably typo's too, but I like the poem a lot. You did a good job of writing this  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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