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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Lost, I wander, Through thoughts of glass, That shatters at the slightest touch. Delicate and beautiful, Cold and hard. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was short and sweet....it was also very deep. I liked it a lot...  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
......wow. That seems to be a shallow reply, but its all I can think of...wow...... ~Carly |
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Dazed_and_Confused Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 15 |
When I read this poem I can visualise what your saying. I love it.  |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Thanks everyone, glad you like it. I wrote it at like two in the morning my time  couldn't sleep, and I wrote it about a bit of a delicate situation that I'm dealing with at the moment. And Carly, don't worry about not having a lot to say, I'll often only have "wow" as a responce to some of the poems I read."Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ I am lost in my own mind. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Your words have quite a punch here. Well written, I liked this extremely well! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well this poem is pretty deep but it seems that only the author can know exactly what it's about. All this poem says is that you're lost in delicate thought. Like whatever you're thinking is a sensetive topic. I couldn't penetrate exactly WHAT you're thinking about cuz i didn't find it was stated within the poem. Any tip?  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this, nice job writing it !"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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