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Once In love but not for sure
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Once In love but not for sure |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Me and you were so right for love We thought we loved each other but thought is just the word we knew How can we be but we didnt quite know Pain comes with love Love was the pain we needed for each other to be together indeed forever But I lay awake here in my room was it pain? Or were my thought all wrong when I cried in my pillow? I see pure darkness but darkness fears the light Like I needed you for the night to hold To make sure we were once in love but not sure |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem was powerful and it was also vert touching. Love is such a powerful subject and you poem shows that well. Keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
I love this. I really understand what your saying. I always question love. DO I love her? Did I love her? Is it to late to still love her? Or did I make all this up to make me feel better?.... Great poem IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey!! Its really good to see you here in Teen Poetry  I really liked this poem and i cant wait to read more!!!!P.S.--Thanks for the e-mail! |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Thankk you all for the comments....I really enjoy writing poetry for people to read..I am working on one that will go here and In the next Dark passions...But thank you all Kim |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Thanks, Thanks, Thanks......Keep reading I hope you enjoy Im working on one right now about my friend who died in RL. then I heard about it at school..... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This poem was kind of hard for me to read. It kept referring to how this was this but that then this and that and this. I liked the overall meaning and i'm not saying it was bad, but it was kind of hard for my petty mind to comprehend the flow. I see others did, so I guess i'm alone on this one. Good poem though.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I didn't exactly follow all of this either, but I got some of it. Sometimes you have to wonder if you're in love or in love with the idea of it. Keep posting "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Buffy: I liked this poem. The famous question! What is love??? There is so many defenitions to it that its hard to pinpoint. I guess as they say you just know. Love is a complex thing if you ask me. Good luck finding someone to make you happy for good love not just to comfort your dark hours. Love is fickle, I know so please do be careful. Take care.~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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