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Love Shines Bright... |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
It's amazing how love embraces your heart no matter how far you are. That brings two people together be it near, or from afar. Intertwining, two souls combining melding into each other like tar. Making a love that shines forever, outlasting even the stars. -"!!!" |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Great depiction of love. and congrats on your 100th post. hope to see many more "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Thanx, IsGona, for takin time out to read my poem, and to congratulate me on my big 100. I hope to post many more poems as well! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a great 100th post and i hope you get to 200 faster! Anyway i like the message in this poem. The intertwining fact of it all was great. keep posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a relly good job here! I really like this line: "Intertwining, two souls combining" "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Great poem! i really loved the way you described love! awesome job!  Curly |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
DOPEY: Thanx for the congrats on my big 100. And hopefully i will get to 200 a little bit faster. LAKEWALKER: Thanx, ive been getting a couple of comments about that "Intertwining, 2 souls combining" line. CURLYGURLY: Thanx for the response, and im DOUBLY-glad that you enjoyed how i described love. Thank you ALL for your responses, hope to hear from yall soon. Later! |
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Jose Marti Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 374washing DC |
Great poem I liked it a lot It's better than a lot of what I've been writing lately |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Congratulations on your 100th post!!! I hope to see you posting more making a faster way to 200. Good poem. Making a love that shines forever, outlasting even the stars. Good choice of words. Keep it up!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was great!! Short and sweet I liked it a lot!!!This was the best part:"Making a love that shines forever, outlasting even the stars." |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
JoseMarti: Im glad you like the poem. Of course, I havent been on here in a while, so ive had plenty of time to think about what to post. Erin: Thank you for the best wishes, Erin. Like i said to dopey dope, i hope to get to 200 a little faster myself, but hey, as long as i get there, y'know... Oh, btw, im glad you liked that verse of the poem. It was my favorite one to write SugarHigh: Thanks for takin time out to read my poem. Im glad that you, also liked that last verse i wrote. It took some time to think it up, but it was well worth it. Thanx, all of yall, for readin, and responding, and ill catch you all later! smiles to all!! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
!!!- WOW!! this is really beautifully done... you have a wonderful talent...keep up the good work.. *smiles*, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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!!! Member
since 2000-08-12
Posts 137VA (U.S.A) |
Thanx a LOT for the response, Vicki! It is VERY much appriciated And as for keepin up the good work, dont worry, ill try... |
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