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In This Strange World
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In This Strange World |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
In This Strange World In a room with a hundred people I'd still feel all alone But there are some things about me That I have never shown They way I love you With all my heart But no matter what I do We always end up apart. I'd give anything I own Just to have a chance i'm just asking for a friendship I don't even want romance. But I guess some dreams Will never come true No matter how hard you try Or how much I love you. If there was a way to tell you Exactly how I feel I'd tell you that I love you And I know my love is real. But I never got my turn To say what I wanted to say Maybe in this strange world Things are meant to be this way. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a great piece. I can relate to this SOOOO well. I hope that you are able to tell this person the way you feel someday. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
I know exactly what you feel! you captured it well, but its funny maybe im wrong but because things are soo "weird" as you say you know i am almost ok with that. Being without someone may leave the door open for someone else......you captured that feeling well in this. Great Job! "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I guess some dreams arent meant to be true, but its extremely unfortunate. I think if someone loves another than they have every right in the world to be happy with that person their heart captures...but if that happened to everyone, every single time someone fell in love, i guess it would go unappreciated. Once you find that one guy that can treat you exactly how you want to be treated and you can be happy with for the rest of your life, you'll hopefully realize that all this pain this guy is putting you through now, is worth it, because it'll make the right person all the more special...Keep smiling hun  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dreamer- wonderful write... you've done a great job of getting your feelings across in this.. keep it up.. *smiles*, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
aww htis is so good! good luck with this guy! unrequitted love is the hardest thing to deal with  i know from experience btu great display of emotion!~*pixie*~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Pixie babe copying my thing with unrequited love.......hehe. Anyway i think this poem is sad and i know how you feel. I wish you the best of luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I also think this tells your feelings well, you did a good job on it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
well.. everyone else has basically said it all!!! this is great!! i luv it.. keep up the good work!! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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