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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Hey everyone!! Im sorry that the first time i posted this poem it was blank...i dunno why but i must have spazzed out or somethin...Well here it is...FINALLY!!! I told you that i loved you, A countless number of times. But i dont think you heard me, I was saying it through my eyes. I told you that i cared for you, In many different ways. I dont think you heard me then either, You had to listen closely to my heart, To hear what it had to say. I told you that i need you, Numerous times in our life. I doubt that you heard me, Unless you read it in the tears i cried.. I need you to know i love you, I need you to know i care. I need you to know that my world would end, If i awoke tomorrow and you werent there. I need you to know that i need you, Oh so very much. I need you to know that i melt, Soley by your touch.. I love you so much, I need you to breathe, I care for you deeply, I told you these things many times, Have you heard me? |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful piece. I hope that this person has finally heard you, although I don't think that anyone could ignore writing like this!  Thanks for posting!"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
this was a really well written poem..i hope the person this was for heard what you were trying to tell them..again..great poem.. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a lot. You really do have talent.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanks everyone for your replies |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like how this poem was written, I was a little surprised when I read this: "But i dont think you heard me, I was saying it through my eyes." I just think that's really great writing, and then you follow the same pattern through the whole poem. I don't know if you get waht I'm saying, but I really like the poem I hope that if someone needs to know you love them, you share this poem with them !< !signature--> "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 12-03-2000).] |
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Slim Junior Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 49Kentucky, USA |
Great poem! i think this really has deep meaning to it. i hope you are able to share this with that special someone and that they understand that you are trying to share your love with them. keep it up! "just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible" |
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