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QTpieOmy
Junior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 11
Illinois

0 posted 2000-12-02 02:56 AM

Evey night I look up at the sky
and watch the glowing moon-
so still, bright, and beautiful.
I only wish you were here lying next to me,
to see it's beauty too.
Then I realize you can still see it's beauty,
even though you aren't next to me.
You can see the moon wherever you may be.
And I hope your thinking of me
When you look up at the sky.
I know I'm thinking of you.
Every day;
All the time...

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

1 posted 2000-12-02 09:07 AM

usually i say great poem which it is but im sorry i dont have the heart to write much so thats all i can say sorry.
~branden~

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"

LoveBug

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Member Elite

since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

2 posted 2000-12-02 10:13 AM

This is a beautiful poem. I can really relate to what you are feeling, and you describe everything so well. I wrote something similar myself, but it was awhile ago. Anyway, keep up the good work!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

3 posted 2000-12-02 10:22 PM

Don't worry about Braden up there. He's going through some rough times right now. Anyway Welcome to passions and i surely hope you have a nice stay. I think this poem was great in the sense that the expression was out there. You stated loud and clear exactly what you needed to. It also had this magical undertone with the moon and how even though he wasn't with you.....you knew he could be looking at it too.....and you're thinkin about him. Good job....post more.

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

4 posted 2000-12-03 02:40 PM

Great thoughts in this poem, I like it

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Slim
Junior Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 49
Kentucky, USA

5 posted 2000-12-04 06:31 PM

Great poem.. luved it.. keep it up!!

"just because you dont know it or havent seen it, doesnt mean it isnt possible"

Andrea4writes
Junior Member

since 2000-12-03

Posts 31
Fayetteville, NC USA

6 posted 2000-12-04 06:37 PM

really cool wonderful thoughts ... great work... i loved it .. keep up the work~!

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