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A silly little poem
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A silly little poem |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas 
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This is called "Don't you every listen" Open the door, Make sure no one is there, Run to a chair, Craw on the bed Fall on your head, Cry and scream for mommy..... Don't you ever listen???? No, not really.... See my brother sitting the staring at the screen, Running up, Kicking him, Truning around and screaming, "He hit me!", "She kicked me!", "Young lady,go to your room!" Don't you ever listen???? No, not really!  |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
hehe  this is kinda funny. I love the little dialog...Don't you ever listen???? No, not really! Thanks for sharing, IsGona |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This is very nice, I like it, it isn't too serious, and yet, who ever listens? Keep it up Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Haha, I love this, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
This was pretty cool. if you're referring to a little brother or sister, i totally agree! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Whatcha say?  Seriously, this is a cute little poem, as you say. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This truly was a silly little poem. And about little brothers, I'M the little brother in the family. *grins evily*  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Actually, this is about me.... I have ALWAYS been mischevous, and being a daddy's girl I have gotten away with pretty much anything. Thanks for the replys. |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, this was so great. In my family, Daddy's got 2 little girls..but only one's an angel, and it sure isn't me...very cute poem, and ever so true. ~Carly Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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Demon_knight New Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 8 |
She is right she has gotten everthing she has wanted except to be loved by a real amn that won't walk away. When people find true love it's better than ok. But you can be a fool to let love slip away. ME |
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