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jytree
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0 posted 2000-11-29 10:16 AM


As I look upon the midnight stars,
I try to guess where you are,
For all the world can just wait,
While I fund the courage to aske you on a date.

I know you want me to be the man that I am,
But simply sometimes it hard to understand,
The I feel when you look me in the eyes,
It is enough to know the plantes out of eline.

I am a man that had true romance,
But I lost it all under I stupid cirstance,
If you need to judge first do it now,
Becaue I think all you will find al things to make you proud.

See me now for who I am,
That is a man after God and his son the lamb,
I am funny at times yes indeed,
If you think not wait and see.!

There are still alot of things hidden inside,
But if I told you it would spoil the surprise!.

Well time to say goodbye,
Save your sadness for now,
Because the next time you will see me I'll be in the clouds.


Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born


© Copyright 2000 Michael Jay vaughn - All Rights Reserved
chic
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1 posted 2000-11-29 12:30 PM


Great poem Jay and it had alot of feeling in it.

"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

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2 posted 2000-11-29 02:36 PM


It's always tough to love someone and be afraid to make your feelings known. I hope that you get the nerve to tell her someday. Thanks for posting!

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



jytree
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3 posted 2000-11-29 02:47 PM


Thanks chic and thanks love bug it is true It is hard to tell someone who you really feel that is one way I write potrey Chic Look at the poem I wrote for you I could never tell you that in person it is just eaiser to make a pome out of it rather than face them you can call me a coward but they still get the message.

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born



Greeneyes617
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4 posted 2000-11-29 09:18 PM


Thanx jytree, that is sweet of you. You are my best friend. Remember I will always love you!You're the coolest, all though you get on my nerves some times.   You know I will always be here for you! Keep writting.
ya bro!

IsGona
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5 posted 2000-11-29 10:28 PM


I know this feeling to well.  I learned of the pain of regreting what I didn't say and share the hard way.  So I really hope that she reads this poem.  I really enjoyed this poem.
IsGona

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I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN
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chic
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6 posted 2000-11-30 02:00 PM


Just one thing Jay...I could never call you a coward.  You are one of my best friends and you mean too much to me for me to call you anything less than a friend.  I loved the poem you wrote for me it was very sweet and I will remember it always.  

"Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me!

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7 posted 2000-11-30 03:46 PM


I think you did a really good job on this poem!!

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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kimmy
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8 posted 2000-11-30 05:05 PM


i really enjoyed this poem...nice job..
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9 posted 2000-11-30 07:26 PM


Another great poem jytree!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


jytree
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10 posted 2000-12-04 11:23 AM


Thanks everybody this was to my friends that still talk to me Hint Hint scg.!!!
This is really devoted to my friend the one I love The Ones That I did love as a girlfriend and one I love as my friend Just remember that there is a place in my heart for all of you and my arms are always open for a cheerful hug and my shoulder if you can reach them are always ready to catch any tear that may fall from your eyes I will live my life according to how I feel in my heart that is why I have mood swings sometimes but that is why I live like a lover ad not a fighter geez I could make a poem out of this!

Love is pure in it's top form,
But with out romance love is not born



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