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R eal I gnorant P erson
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R eal I gnorant P erson |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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~¤~R eal I gnorant P erson ~¤~ Forgotten promises Empty eyes Broken hearts Burning lies You are forgotten Let it be said I'll now pretend You are Dead x x x ------ R.I.P. "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!! I dont know what to say good job.... "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
That was badass! Jon |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Interesting style.... I like... I like!  xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Heyellow. This really kicked some booty!!!!! The lil thingy at the bottom added a strong pizzaz to the whole thing.. Amazerific job. ~Carly Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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Dean Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 120Canada |
Good stuff!! Short and sweet, and yet very, very effective! Keep up the good work. "Live to love or why live at all" Deano :) |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
We all have people we wish we could erase from our lives. You describe it well. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow! That's great. Harsh...I like it  Bel |
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kimmy Member
since 2000-07-31
Posts 98 |
i loved the style you chose to write this poem...i loved it...it was awesome.. |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Amazing work here Isgona!!!Keep it up...  People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I liked this one a lot, it's really good "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you everybody who read this. I don't know where this poem came from. This side of me is ussaully pretty dormant, but the more I thaught of this person the more I wanted to say this. Thanks again IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I like how you changed the meaning of RIP. I also like that little drawing of the dead person hehe. Anyway the poem was nice. A wonderful read as usual.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was a very creative poem...i liked it!! Good job |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Thank you Dopey and xShUgArHiGhx. I love getting relies from you guys. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
WOW that was really good. wow don't know what to say, but great poem! Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow.. this is really good! i liked the format too! keep up the awesome work!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
wow.. this is really good! i liked the format too! keep up the awesome work!! ~*Pixie*~ |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
You guys are so nice Thank you This is the most wow's I've ever gotten. hehe Thanks again IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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