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Yankee10n20BFF
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since 2000-11-02

Posts 27
T-Town, AL

0 posted 2000-11-29 09:35 PM

I wrote this poem about my crush

Your Eyes

Your eyes are like magnents,
they draw me closer to you.
Your eyes are like the morning sun,
gleaming on the shining morning dew.
Your eyes are like angel's wings,
always so peaceful and full of love.
Your eyes are like Heaven's greatest creation,
God's greatest gift from up above.
Your eyes are like an amazing glow of brown,
when they look at me I crumble up inside.
Your eyes are like a thousand doves,
gliding around in Heaven way up above.
Your eyes are like an amazing dream,
that everyday seems to come true.
Your eyes are just a little part
of the many things I love about you!

No matter what you are going through, all you have to do is close your eyes and dream cause no one can take them away from you.

LoveBug

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Posts 4697

1 posted 2000-11-29 10:03 PM

There's nothing like looking into the eyes of the one that you love. You describe this beautifully. Thanks for posting!

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Greeneyes617
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since 2000-11-22

Posts 329
Arkansas

2 posted 2000-11-30 12:15 PM

Man, what can I say? WOW! This is an awesome poem. Thanks for posting it.

Erin
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since 2000-06-15

Posts 2527
~Chicago~

3 posted 2000-11-30 01:38 AM

Good one!!!To me eyes are the thing that attract me to someone I like...It is the first thing that grabs my attention...

People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

TearsOfPearls
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 322
Vereeniging, South-Africa

4 posted 2000-11-30 02:04 PM

Like they say, eyes are the window to the soul, you described looking into this soul very well. Very discriptive.

Great poem, keep it up

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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

5 posted 2000-11-30 03:49 PM

Great job of describing your thoughts here. Your last two lines seem so good, it's a great ending

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curlygurly
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 276
USA

6 posted 2000-11-30 04:04 PM

This was so sweet! guys look even better when they have really cool eyes, especially shades of blue. hehe. great poem!

Curly

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kimmy
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since 2000-07-31

Posts 98

7 posted 2000-11-30 05:02 PM

i really enjoyed this poem..it was sweet..i hope your crush gets to read this sometime..

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

8 posted 2000-11-30 07:21 PM

This was a great tribute to your crush. I hope things work out and all is well with you. Good luck on getting this guy!

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DreamerGrl27
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 142

9 posted 2000-12-01 06:47 PM

This was really good...eyes really do say a lot about a person...I love looking at peoples' eyes cause they can be so different. I loved your ending, it was really cute.

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

10 posted 2000-12-02 12:15 PM

This was such a sweet poem...I love eyes!! They are like one of the most attractive thing i can find in a person...they tell so much about your mood and how your feeling. Very cute poem hun!!!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2000-12-02 02:18 AM

Yankee-
   this is really beautiful..
   you express your feelings for
   this person very well..
   lovely...

   *smiles*,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

B@BYG!RL
Junior Member

since 2000-11-30

Posts 19
Australia

12 posted 2000-12-02 07:40 AM

The only way to tell if someone is smiling, is by looking at their eyes.. mmmmmm.. hehe

~Dianne

Pixie-Babe03
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since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

13 posted 2000-12-02 03:35 PM

great poem!!! i love it!!

~*Pixie*~

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