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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
let go for once stand in the rain let the drops drip drip drip down on your face don't be so uptight there's no harm in being wet let the drip drops drape your clothes there's no harm in being wet relinquish worries, run, relish the rain you can't always be right you can't always be dry throw away all reluctance get all you can get make the most of the rain there's no harm in being wet never forget |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I don't like those uptight people either! It's good to just let go sometimes. I hope this person takes your advice. Thanks for sharing! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
AWW I loved this poem!!! I dunno what else to say but it just made the biggest smile form on my face while i read it just having life be that simple and free...I wish we all took time to not be so uptight...ahhh excellent poem!! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job with this one, it's a very good message  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this poem was amazing! I liked this poem a lot. Post more!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very nice poem. It's cool when we can drop our worries and just chill. Good message Jon |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I love the rain!!! And I loved this poem. It's so true. Great job. ~Carly Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
hey haywana, that was a good one,. but then again everyone that u write is good, keep it up!!!!! MNICUTE |
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