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Prince Charming |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
I want to be inlove, I want that feeling of magic when you look into someones eyes and see their soul. When you hear them talk and understand their feelings. When you say I love you, and mean it to last forever. And, when the other person loves you eternally. I want to be inlove with my soulmate. The one who loves me for me, and not me for what they wish or think I can be, but for what I am. The one who always wants to be near me..but even if we are apart still carries a part of me forever in their soul. The one who closes their eyes and sees me ...the one who dreams of our future... but continues their own path. The one who wants me to be happy, and wants us to last. I want to be inlove with the one who loves me as much as I them... I want a love that everything stops for....a love that can freeze even time. "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah... I know this feeling. We all want that magical person who will make the world right. You describe these feelings well. Thanks for posting "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Yes, I believe this the elusive dream of most. Great job expressing it. IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Your feelings are shared by many people, I hope it comes true for you  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
The day i get my prince charming is the day the world stops.....why?....hmmmmmm i wonder. Maybe cuz im a GUY!!!!! anyway this poem is nice....a common ideal for many girls/women. Good luck!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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DreamerGrl27 Member
since 2000-10-29
Posts 142 |
Isnt this what everyone wants? I definetly do...I hope you find this...I think everyone should because that's the best part of life. The poem was really good...I loved it. |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
Great Poem I liked it, it explained how feel. I hope to see more of your poetry Minna If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
CareBear- ah yes...don't we all.. you've expressed the dream well. i really enjoyed reading this. *smiles* ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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B@BYG!RL Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 19Australia |
Does any one know where I can find/buy/obtain a guy like this..?! hehe =o) ~Dianne |
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B@BYG!RL Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 19Australia |
j/k all =oP |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
thsi is such a cute poem i can totally relate to it, you are a great write! keep it up!~*Pixie*~ |
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