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DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

0 posted 2000-11-30 03:43 PM

**Ok i posted this like 2 days ago..and i was replying to it..and i typed it out and everything and it like replaced it when some weird thing...i dont know what happened.so im sorry! Here it is again

**One More Chance**

"Give me one more chance.."
you whisper in my ear.
As you run your fingers through my hair.
"..this time I promise, nothing fear.."

Being this close to you,
fear is the last thing on my mind.
If you searched my heart a little deeper,
love for you is all you'd find.

"..I want to let you in.."
spoken soflty against my lips.
As you gaze into my eyes.
"..i want to feel you thro my fingertips.."

By now I dont even hear you,
I FEEL your soul talking to me
No more words are needed,
you soulmate's what I'm destined to be.

Everything's going to be ok,
a smile appears on my face.
You smile, knowing what it means,
as I lie melting into your warm embrace.*

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"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

[This message has been edited by DancinQueen (edited 12-02-2000).]

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

1 posted 2000-11-30 04:29 PM

Excellent job on this, I really like how you worked dialouge into it. Great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2000-11-30 07:19 PM

What a sweet poem!!! I really liked this poem!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2000-12-01 09:42 AM

hey sweets or is it peahes

well, you know how I feel about everything, I've talked to you about it. I'm just happy that everything has seemed to have turned around for ya.

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR

Jenn Cirrincione

Member Elite

since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
Fl

4 posted 2000-12-01 06:04 PM

So you got your boy back?? Good for you! tread lightly, for love is hard, men are fickle, and hearts are easily broken at times!!! Good luck to you! Loved the style of this one.
xoxo
Jenn< !signature-->

"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 12-01-2000).]

DancinQueen

Senior Member

since 2000-07-29

Posts 1092
Kokomo,IN,USA

5 posted 2000-12-02 12:17 PM

Wow! THanks everyone for replying

Means alot...especially when the poem comes right from the heart

thank you so much

-=Kiley=-

"A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else"

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