Teen Poetry #3 |
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Indict |
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Rhiannon Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 95Fayetteville, TN USA |
I can't indict you After all the things you've inflicted I've forgiven I've left behind Have you forgiven me? Can I let go of what I've Held onto for so long And can I give up And be as strong As you It comes and goes What everyone knows No one remembered to tell me No one bothered to warn me That you didn't want to want me That you could give up on me so Easily I can't indict you Cause you've just done what you Always have and I can't place blame I can't leave you like they left you I can't give you what she gives you So I'll be the one to listen To cry with you and lie to you I don't have anything better to do The night is my companion The solitude my guide Would I spend forever here And not be satisfied? Sarah MacLachlan, "Possession" |
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CareBear3 Junior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 39New Hampshire |
I think this is beatiful, and I think I know exactly what you are feeling. I have a friend...and I love him and I would love to be with him, but we are just friends, and I am there to listen to his problems and help him emotionally while other girls get to have fun! Maybe I misinterpreted it...email me or reply if I did, otherwise I think its incredible! "In great moments life seems neither right nor wrong but something greater it seems inevitable" ~Kelley |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I got a little different meaning from this, but I think it's very well done. I really like it. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this very much. You're on a roll here! ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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