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A Friend Like You.
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A Friend Like You. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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I met this person, I went out with this person, I loved this person, I hurt this person, This person is believe it or not, Is the one person that cares most in my life, This person is someone who I cry on there shoulder, This person is a Friend like YOU! Someone who Loves me, Even though it hurts them to see me with her now, She still helps me through bad times, So far its been 2 months with the new one, I thought it was all over a month ago, But no Believe it or not My friend stoped me, You may think good thats what friends are supposed to do, But When that friend was once an ex gf, You expect them to laugh, But no shes always there, I must say I love you more and more, I love my gf but no more then i love you, Your that special person i needed in my life..... A FRIEND LIKE YOU... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This is very sweet! Keep up the good work!  *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Who would have thought that an ex could be such a good friend? Friendships seem to spring up in the strangest places, and I'm glad that you've found a friend in this person. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
branden- you never fail to impress me with the gentleness and sincerity of your heart.  this is such a sweet tribute to your friend...and it's wonderful that the two of you have remained close. As lucky as you are to have a friend like her...she is just as fortunate to have a friend as caring as you.. keep up the wonderful writing.. *smiles*, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Ya, I am pretty lucky to have a friend like her but you see it seems so weird cuz i can talk to her about my gf but it hurts her and she doesnt let that get in the way of me and her's realationship she just sets her feelings aside and listens and to me thats a bestfriend. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It sounds like your friend is really great, this is such a nice poem! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
THis is great........i understand how it is to talk to women about my GF.......they get real hurt. What can i say? Im irresistable!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
LoL@Dopey hey there thanks for the reply. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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