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What I saw in my dad.........
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What I saw in my dad......... |
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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I saw pain I saw sorrow I felt his pain and sorrow. I said this isn't fair to him his body cannot take it anymore he is going to die soon. I am blessed to have him a father he'll always be in my heart he'll never leave either. When I lost hope he gave me hope when I lost myself he found myself. I saw his body getting weaker there wasn't any stopping him from dying and he did on 12-23-99. All his cancer's gone he's not in pain he is resting for what he had been threw. I'll never forget him for the world how can you forget a good dad like him you just don't. I love you daddy.. ~*~Minna~*~  If I could walk I'd be glad..But I'm glad the way I am- ~*~me~*~ |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Minna, this is a beautiful tribute to your father. I'm sure he's proud of who you are and of what a great writer you are becoming. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such a sad and tragic thing...i'm so sorry that this happened to you and and your father, but atleast he isnt in pain anymore hun...im sorry. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a beautiful tribute to your father Minna ... I'm so sorry for your loss, take care, and hugs to you ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
"I'll never forget him for the world how can you forget a good dad like him" Another great tribute to your father. Your poems always have real feelings in them, keep up the awesome work "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Yea i think this poem is great. Another appreciated tribute to your dad.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you have writeen such sad poems Minna. But sometimes it's our misfortunes that lead us to write with such beauty. I'm sorry to hear what your dad had to go thru, and specially what you have to go thru too. thanks for sharing this I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I'm sorry this has happened to you. But this is very well written, and I am positive that where ever your dad is, he's proud of what you're becoming. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces." |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This is a great tribute to you father. Best regards IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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