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~*~PrettyGirly~*~ Member
since 2000-11-04
Posts 83Fitchburg Ma Usa |
I look at the people around me and they are not like me They can walk they can run they can dance they have dreams I say it’s unfair and they don’t listen I wish they did I look at the people again they go “Hi” I smile at them I go on the computer and notice I have many friends Who are like me we talk about things that upset us I look at my family ask myself why I am I like this? I look at pictures when my younger sister would talk to me I’d smile in those pictures and now she won’t smile She is to cool for me now I’m just another person I look at her and go shake my head I want to scream her name get her to talk like us to But we are in our own worlds now her world is friends My world is spasms walking goals.. Min December 2, 2000 A romance last forever you want it, A friendship last a life time |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great. I thought it was sad though that your relationship with your sister diminished with time and social groups. I hope that everything will eventually mend itself. Good luck and keep on posting!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
This really was great. I hope one day your relationship w/ your sis will thrive again. Best regards IsGona |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
This was a great poem, sorry to hear about your sis. Things are almost the same between my sis and I, and I get so frustrated and angry when I can't make her see things the way I do...Keep up the great work  Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I was going to comment about your sister and now I see everyone else has. But I guess I'll say it anyway, I hope someday soon she will see how she is treating you and will stop acting that way. Nice job of getting your thoughts out on this one! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
I have a younger sister and we never get a long. She get's straight A's and I get around a 2.5 and she always tells me about it. That's just life though and someday we might get a long but I don't really care now. Anyway great poem and I hope you and your sister start getting along since that's what you want. Lauren |
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