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My Final Goodbye.
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My Final Goodbye. |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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My Final Goodbye My final goodbye will never be forgot, Someday when on my deathbed I lay, Everyone will be gathered around and do nothing but pray, My final goodbye will hurt everyone, It wasnt till now untill I realized how much I was loved, To late now because on my death bed I lay, Never been told by my mom "I Love You" untill now, To late now because its my final day, I dont wanna go but the stress, I couldnt take it, So somebody else will have to now, Because im on my way to see the one who cares, The one who went up in the sky about 2 years ago, The ONLY person who loved me while I was on this earth, He's gone and so am I, My last goodbye is like this... Thanks mom,dad(i never met),Stepdad,sis's,and everyone else im sorry to say it mom but the only person I can say I really love is my gf lisa so im sorry but we all know this is my final day so may the good lord watch over you cuz I know I will. |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
We all have times that we think about what it will be like at the end of our lives. I hope that is isn't coming soon for you, my friend. If you need to talk, feel free to e-mail me! Thanks for posting! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Hey man, this poem is good. I am sure that you are just writing from your what if standpoint, but if not, and you need to talk drop me a line. I'm sure it's all cool though. Jon |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I wish that you could have a better relationship with your family, but sometimes life sucks. You know what I mean? As always, you did a really good job of writing your feelings in this poem!  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I like the idea of informing us if the posts you show are real, or as I've said before the what-ifs.... I am sorry about your relationship with your mom, that appears very real. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great braden and i surely do hope that your relationship gets better.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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