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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA

0 posted 2000-11-27 04:54 PM


Everbody hurts sometimes.
Everyone cries
Everybody's heart gets broken and we all ache
all tho it seems unbearable and i feel like i can't face another day
I tuck in my shirt and dry my eyes
I push all the hurt aside and i am strong
I walk by you with a smile on my face
knowing that God gives me the strength to make it thru this
I CAN be happy without you
but right now thats hard to see
I'll be okay without you
I am a girl thats been thru a lot
You might be able to slow me down
but you'll never stop me


The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

© Copyright 2000 Jenna-Nicole Boutilier - All Rights Reserved
Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
1 posted 2000-11-27 05:01 PM


Ooooo...I reallyyyy liked this positive attitude in this one! You go girl! lol. But seriously, I love the message here. It is so true that we all hurt, but it's also true that we all have the ability to get thru hard times. I just had a bad break up over the weekend and today was my first day back at school face to face with my ex...Sooo this is really something I needed to read today. Well done and thanx for posting it  
~Kris

~*Won't you come and hold my hand?
This world has taken me as far as it can...
without your smile.~*

~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong,

Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
2 posted 2000-11-27 05:28 PM


glad i could help
keeping yer head up and having a positive attitude is the only thing that will save you and get you thru this
be strong!
thanks for the reply

The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
3 posted 2000-11-28 03:56 PM


I also love your attitude, it's great that you can see things so optimisticly.  And good job on the poem

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker
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Dopey Dope
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since 2000-08-30
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-30 06:01 PM


The positivity in this one is mind blowing. All i gotta say is "YOU GO GIRL!"
haha ok bye.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


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