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Time Doesn't Exist
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Time Doesn't Exist |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
T- ime doesn't exist I- t was only created M- inds overwhelmed by it E- volution relies on it D- oes anyone know it's real? O- nly those who believe E- ven though we think so S- omebody knows it's not N- oone can prove it T- ime only exists to believers E- veryone revolves around it X- eroxing time won't make it real I- t's only a way to stay connected S- top asking for the time T- ime doesn't exist "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Very interesting style in which you chose to write this poem...I thought this was very cool. |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sorry hun!! Posted twice!! [This message has been edited by xShUgArHiGhx (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I liked this style too. It was a great poem. ~Carly Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the style rocked and the poem itself was wonderful! Great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Time is just an idea that we humans created to try to create some order in a world od chaos... I really love your writing style! Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey chica, great one!!   Just one question...what made you think of him and his weird theory? Hmmm...keep it up....smile  Bel |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
ahhh TIME. Perhaps the 4th dimension. What exactly does time messure? How does one define a second? interesting poem BTW Nice job finding a word that starts w/ X and still made perfect sence. . IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I liked this. In a way it made sense to me. Go figure. I can't help it, I'm a blonde. Anyways, I really liked the style you wrote it in.  |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did an excellent job with this style, and such a good job with that "X" as someone already stated Thinking like this is interesting because you can go on and on about it for a long time, wait, no, time doesn't exist. Hmmmmm, what to do now!?! Anyway, nice job, I like it "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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