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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Sometymes I wonder, If you even care. Sometymes it feels like, You just don’t care. Sometymes you act like, You’re so in love. Sometymes I look in your eyes, And they seem so cold. Sometymes I look in them, And all I see is love. Sometymes all you do is talk, And say how much you love me. Sometymes you don’t talk at all, Or even look at me. Sometymes you’re so distant, Then others, we’re right there. Sometymes we say the same thing, At the exact some tyme. Sometymes you call, And all you do is talk. Sometymes you call me, And all I do is listen to you talk to another. Sometymes I just wanna hang up, But sit there and listen… Just cuz I love you! ! ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ "If ya stop looking, love will bite ya in the butt!!" ~ Me [This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 11-28-2000).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Tamma, I can relate to this poem. I have had relatinships that go back and forth but my love is what is keeping me there. Very Nice Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i surely hope love doesn't bite ME in the butt. ANyway this was another great poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a wonderful way to make your feelings known. I hope you show this to him! Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Ughhh guyz...they make you get all these mixed feelings and they do all these drastically different things so you never know what to expect from them...but all of this is worth it for the one you love such as Justin...  |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
You got that right! Justin's great, but sometymes he's more worried about his friends, then others, he's kissin' on me very 5 sec ~*~ Tamma Loves Justin ~*~ "If ya stop looking, Love will bite ya in the butt!!" ~Me “Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.” ~Me |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
no matter how strong the love, we still seem to question it from time to time. Great poem IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a good job of getting your feelings told in this poem, nice job "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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