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Why I'm Afraid
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Why I'm Afraid |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im so afraid, It makes me so sad. The feeling of good, No longer out does the bad. Its almost like im stuggling, With something in the air, Something i cant see, But yet still know is there. Its an endless fight, The winner takes all. It's knocked me down many times, Too often i choose to fall. Cause when your in this constant battle, You grow week, Tired, And Fed-up. By the time you come close to your victory, Your ready to give up. My on going battle, With the life i live. Cant stay like this much longer, Somethings gotta give. Keep giving it time, To be rescued, Or saved. I'm constantly being told, "Keep your head up", "Give it a few more days". But the fact is, What i'll feel like in a few more days, Is the reason, why i'm afraid. |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
awesome poem! i can totally relate, people are always telling me to keep my head up and to smile, yeah right! and it's not always gonna get better no matter what people tend to think, it's just an optimistic saying. not like i hate it when people say that, but ya know it's not always gonna be ok  Curly "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Very, nice poem. Great work, I can totally relate! I'm looking forwar dot seeing more of your work. Thanks for sharing that poem! - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
they tell that to you to?i can relate...but they probaly say it to show u they care..nice poem Ina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Shugar, don't be afraid. You'll be quite alright and you know that. I hope times get well but i'm confused. This poem obviously has to be in a different time period than the Happiness poem i read earlier......anyway good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Strangely enough Dopey...this is in the same time period...but my mood has been changed day by day due to what im taking. It sux but thats just how my life is right now..im sorry thats kinda of confusing. Thanx for the replies |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've expressed this up and down feeling well Shugar ... I know it's a struggle right now, but make sure you keep communication with your friends and family. It may take a little bit to get on an even keel, but you'll get there. Hugs to you ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I like the way this is written, it's done very well. I liked the flow of it, nice job I can't really say i can relate to this, but i do hope you don't continue to feel like this."But the fact is, What i'll feel like in a few more days, Is the reason, why i'm afraid." "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! http://www.thehungersite.com |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Thanks everyone for your replies! |
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niceguy Member
since 2000-11-13
Posts 113Sapello, NM, USA |
Very powerful girl...awesome poem! I am sorry that you are going through such a tough time. I won't go and tell you to hang in there or keep your head up cause you must be tired of hearing those words right now...but you will be in my thoughts and prayers k? Keep writing. "Don't take love for granted...once it's gone, it hurts." |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
Life is unfortunatly a roller coaster. you climb so slow to reach a peak and the moment you do you plummet back down. your poem did a great job of descibing the fears I think most have. I liked it. keep posting. IsGona |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is so sad  You shouldn't give up. I know it's easy for us to say and it's hard for you to do. But remember the saying what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. Maybe your outlook in life is just wrong. Maybe you need to look at the brighter side of life rather than focusing on the bad. I love the poem, but i hate to see someone hurt so much. please, if you need to talk i'm offering my full attention. And yeah, i'll say it again, KEEP YA HEAD UPI see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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cobie New Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 4netherlands |
you are touching my heart, with this poem, tears running down my face! I do hope, some day, you will be fully enjoying life, you deserve it! |
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Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
Shugar, you feel like this too??? I have to fight the same battles, and I wish I had this one person by my side, but he couldn't care less. Anyways, I've babbled enough for the moment. I really like this poem. Just remember to smile. Alyssa I can't see at all. Even if I could it would all be gray, put your picture on my wall, it reminds me that it's not so bad, it's not so bad. |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
I didn't realize what my friend, Trixie, was going through. She had the same feeling, and it was pretty bad. It hurt so bad to stand by and watch her suffer. I was willing to do anything to make her happy. Although now, I have been through the same thing. I understand and now realized how it feels and what a positive friendship can do for your soul. I consider everyone a friend on here. So friend to friend....Do keep your head up and remember things usually get worse before the get better. SMILE GOD LOVES YOU!  |
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