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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
S- ure we all take for granted O- ur ability to eat solid foods L- uckily almost everyone can, but I- nstead of eating solid foods D- addy only intakes liquids F- ed through a feeding tube O- f course we knew it was coming O- bviously it's good for him D- eep down, I know it's right S- omeday he'll eat again "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. This was such a good poem, I loved the way you explained everything. It made my heart go all tingly....I hope that your daddy eats again...I'm praying for ya... ~Carly |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
sniffle sniffle, Branden picks himself off the floor. This was great but sad. I love it and i think its so....powerfull. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I certainly (maybe unfortunalety) take it for granted. Thanks for sharing this, it's really good! "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i hope thigns go better with your father. Good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
I think that most of us take our health for granted. Thanks for reminding us to be thankful for every day. I hope your father gets better soon! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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curlygurly Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 276USA |
Thanks for replying guys! i called my mom at work and she said that the doctor at the radiation ward or whatever couldn't feel the lump anymore, so it may be gone!!! "So many tears i've cried, so much pain inside" -Lenny Kravitz |
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