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Forever Damned
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Forever Damned |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
So many people so many faces will i find my own in all different places. My identity unknown my destination is too will i ever find myself it's something i have to do Searching and searching with no despair i come across something am i sure it's there? I have discovered something not sure what it is I'm looking for the truth i discover i am only His. He decided what i do He knows what i am but will i ever find the truth? or am i forever damned? ~*Always make time to stop and taste the pop tarts*~ |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Val I LOVE this!!! It's GREAT!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!! *L* Keep up the great work, "Imogen"  [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Tough questions here....exellent job at expressing your feelings, keep it up! *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I really liked the way this was written, with the questions and everything. Great job. ~Carly |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This peice is very pretty. It's about God right? Nice work. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Wow i like this accept for this part "i discover i am only His." It shouldnt be like that. sounds like a controlling kinda poem i dont know its excellent tho. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice poem. Like Alwye said, these are tough questions. It depends on which side you look at it from. So, I am pretty much saying that the answer depends on where you stand? Very thought provoking. Jon |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great and i surely do hope that you are not forever damned. Great job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
We all feel like this sometimes, but we just have to remember that we are always in His sight. You express your feelings well. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Excellent job of getting your thoughts out. This is something that I think you have to answer for yourself, but if you follow Him you are seeking the truth, and he will show you the way. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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