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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa 
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Hi ya guys, wow...it's been a while since I posted...wow...man I missed this place...so here is one...not the best...but hey...we're here to help each other right  It doesn't help me stalling, once again I'm slowly falling, but in my mind I found a way to cope with it, I run away. Around and round in circles I go, moving too fast, showing too slow, and in my mind I found a way and never stopped running away. Don' stand still, no time to stay, no time to heel, no time to stray, I'm still rnning, running away. Bleeding eyes on the floor, so tired now, so very sore, I can't run, run any more. Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Hey welcome back, glad too see some new work from people. I really liked this poem, I really did not understand exactly what you were getting at, but I liked this poem mainly because it can relate to almost anything. Good job and keep up the great work! - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Great to see you've posted again, this was great. It seems like you're tired, and also tired of trying to fight or something...I know how that feels...Well it was great. ~Carly |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
It's good to see you back! We all have times like this, when we flee from something that we are afraid to face. My advice: face it. You're going to have to face it sooner or later. Anyway, you do a good job of describing it in this piece. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Thanks you guys! Planning big can be a gamble...I have already rolled the dice! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Welcome back I think you did a good job of getting this out, I like the poem."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was great and welcome back! The style is nice and i hope to see more of you around!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hey tearsofpearls...nice to see ya again what a way to come back. your post is probably the best one ive read so far today. hope your don't disappear again. stay and keep posting  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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