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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2000-11-21 08:20 PM




through these Teen pages
i've wandered around
and been so impressed by
the things that i've found

incredibly talented
poets live here
listening closely
their hearts i can hear

they speak out in free-verse
and whisper in rhyme
of true love and heartbreak
and friendship sublime

laughter and good times
bring smiles to their faces
and when tears are shed
they share tender embraces

so if you should need me
right here's where i'll be
enjoying the days with
my Teen family


~vlraynes



I want to thank all of you for giving me such a warm welcome into your world.  I look forward to getting to know each and every one of you, and reading lots and lots of your wonderful poetry.  
If there's ever anything I can help you with, please don't hesitate to e-mail me.

Thanks again for letting me be a part of your family.  
You guys are AWESOME!!!    

*smiles*,
-vicky


< !signature-->

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-21-2000).]

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LoveBug
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1 posted 2000-11-21 08:23 PM


Vicky, I'm so glad that you feel the same way about this place that I do. There are a lot of great poets and great people here, and I'm glad that you've seen it. You do a great job of describing it in this piece. Thanks for all you do!  

"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather
"Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav



Kit McCallum
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2 posted 2000-11-21 08:55 PM


Beautiful sentiments Vicky ... what a wonderful tribute to all the talented teens that grace these pages. They're a pretty wonderful group aren't they?  I'm so glad you've joined us ... great to have you here!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2000-11-21 09:01 PM


And I agree! I've spent some time reading here and I believe the future of poetry rests in these pages - and it is in the capable hands of these poets!
Alwye
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In the space between moments
4 posted 2000-11-21 10:12 PM


There are definitely tons of talented people within these teen pages.  I am glad that you have as much enthusiasm as the rest of us!  

*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


sweetstuff101
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5 posted 2000-11-22 01:18 AM


that was really cute!!!

~*~GoOd fRiEnDz ArE hArD 2 FiNd, HaRdEr 2 LeAvE, & iMpOsSiBlE 2 fOrGeT~*~tHe HaRdEsT tHiNg tO Do iS wAtCh tHe 1 U LuV, lUv sUm1 eLsE~*~

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6 posted 2000-11-22 11:42 AM


this was so cute...I havent really gotten to know that many people in this forum...but i try to read their work, and i admit, some of it does bring tears to my eyes...even when I go back and read some of my own work...it scares me...sometimes i laugh, sometimes i cry...but it always brings back the memories that id forgotten. now, i havent been here as long as some people, but ive been here awhile. Ive seen many poets come and go, few have stayed, but those who have share a special bond with everyone else here. and now, vicky, youre here and can join in on our bond  


“Tyme heals all wounds, but some might just take a lifetyme to heal.”
~Me

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7 posted 2000-11-22 12:46 PM


Well i see every moderator in the book has replied and im glad that they are. well ne ways Vick i dont really think you need to thank n e one We need to thank you cuz i know since you've got here i have felt nothing but loved from you i mean you reply to almost every poem i post whether its up on the board from today or 2 weeks past and i love that in a person and well your the kind  of person we need here a passions
               THANK YOU!
                ~BRANDEN~

"i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw"


layla
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8 posted 2000-11-22 03:14 PM


I AM NEW HERE AND I FELT SO WELCOMED BY YOU.
I WANT TO THANKU FOR ALL UR REPLIES TO MY POETRY, U R VERY SWEET AND THIS WAS A BEAUTIFUL POEM. KEEP WRITING. AND REMEMBER A WAY WITH WORDS IS A WAY WITH LIFE.

                    LAYLA

Lakewalker
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9 posted 2000-11-22 04:57 PM


You know, you really seem to be committed to helping us out, I like that.  I think I can safely say this for everyone: it's nice having you here

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
10 posted 2000-11-22 10:17 PM



LoveBug-
   thanks so much...yes, this is truly
   a wonderful place full of awesome
   poets...i love it here!  
   i'm really enjoying getting to know
   everyone here.

Kit-
   Oh yes..they are an OUTSTANDING group!  
   Everyone has made me feel at home, and
   the talent on these pages is amazing.
   thanks so much, my friend.

Sharon-
   right you are, my friend...and the
   future is in excellent hands..
   thanks so much for popping in.

Krista-
   i really am excited to be a part
   of this little world...and what a
   wonderful place it is..
   thanks so much.

sweetstuff101-
   thank you so much...
   glad you like it.

Tamma-
   you are so sweet...thank you so much
   for letting me share in that bond..
   i too enjoy going back and reading
   some of my older poems at times...
   it's always nice to remember..

branden-
   oh yes...and you ARE loved by me...all
   of you are..   it's easy to read and
   reply when i'm offered such wonderful
   poems to choose from...you are all amazing.
   i really want to thank you for the
   warm welcome you've been giving me..
   you've been so sweet, and i really
   appreciate it.. i just love it here!

layla-
   i'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying
   it here...happy i was able to help
   with that..   thanks so much for the
   kind words..   i hope to see lots more
   poems from you.

Lakewalker-
   well, i can safely say, that it's
   wonderful to be here!  
   You have all been so great to me,
   and i can't wait to get to know all
   of you better..
   thanks so much for the kind words.

hugs to all of you,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



xShUgArHiGhx
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11 posted 2000-11-23 09:16 AM


Aww that was soooo sweet!!!! Im so glad that you love it here as much as i do....Thanks hun!!!
Caz
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12 posted 2000-11-23 08:37 PM


Ohh, that was a great and sweet poem! I really liked it.
Well, and about that if you ever need something just ask, do yo uthink you can buy me a plane ticket to Australia?
Your friend,
Caz

It's been raining since you left me.

Jenn Cirrincione
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13 posted 2000-11-24 03:18 PM


Sorry it took me so long to read this, must have missed it. This is very cute, and it means a lot to receive such kind compliments.
xoxo
Jenn


"Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC

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14 posted 2000-11-25 03:08 AM


Well you might be wondering "who the hell is this dopey_dope kid coming out of nowhere?"
Well you haven't seen me cuz i was on a trip to jersey for a week. All these new changes in just 7 days!!!!
Anyway i am a very big contributer to the teen forum. I reply to EVERY SINGLE poem. I am replying to this because i found it really special for you to write US a poem. Great! Hehehe......and ummmmm.....you'll be seeing lots of me. Try not to get too tired of it.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
15 posted 2000-12-02 02:39 AM



xShUgArHiGhx-
   thanks so much, and yes...i do
   love it here...

Caz-
   LOL @ you...well, ok...maybe not
   ANYTHING..lol.  Wish I could, but
   I'm just not that well off...
   Thanks for reading the poem..
   glad you liked it.

Jenn-
   Thanks so much for popping in.
   glad you enjoyed this, and the
   compliments are well-deserved
   by all of you..

Dopey-
   LOL...I could never get tired of
   any of you...and yes...I have seen
   you around in the other forums quite
   a bit, so I know you are a very busy
   Passions member..
   I admire your dedication to the Teen
   forum, as I'm sure many others here
   do, and I look forward to reading
   many of your poems in the future.
   Thanks for the kind comments.

   *smiles*
   ~vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



B@BYG!RL
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16 posted 2000-12-02 07:26 AM


Great poem Vicky!

Can you teach me how to write like that?!?!..

~Dianne

vlraynes
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17 posted 2000-12-06 02:49 PM



B@BYG!RL-
  thank you so much...  
  from what i've seen, i don't need
  to teach you a thing...you have a
  wonderful style of your own..  
  keep it up!!  
  glad you enjoyed this one..  

  *smiles*,
  ~vicky


< !signature-->

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes




[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 12-06-2000).]

Acies
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18 posted 2000-12-26 05:17 PM


cause of that, all of what i've mentioned before in your "welcome poem" is now FREE    including the peanuts.  

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


Melster
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19 posted 2000-12-27 05:48 PM


thanks Vik, we all seem to be welcomed in here...  everyone opens their eyes and reads and tries to help...  I would be lost without all the people here now!!  

Melz!!

Dont believe what ur eyes r telling u they only show limitation. Look with ur understanding, find out what u already know & u will see the way to fly

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