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phoebee83 New Member
since 2000-11-27
Posts 1 |
Give me your love- I'll give you my world. I'd give my life If your happiness was the result. For you- I'd give anything To see you smile- You light up the whole world, My world... Dedicated to: Dale Joshua Rubenstein, the love of my life. I know I haven't posted any poems lately, but I've been really busy. I'm trying to get back into the swing of things. I hope you all enjoy... |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Welcome to passions!!!I like this first post...Sounds like this guy is really special to you...Thanks for sharing it... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! What a lovely first poem. it's short but it doesn't lack in emotions at all. Wonderfull. Thanks for sharing and keep it up. Again, welcome to you passions family  I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hi there, and welcome! This was really sweet, it's so great that you've found someone so special. Keep writing!  ~Carly |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really good piece. We will all encounter a person that we love and value more than anything. You describe this well. Thanks for posting! PS-check your e-mail "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Nice first poem. This is very nice. It describes true love. Great work Jon |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Welcome, welcome! Good work here!xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Love is wonderful...your so lucky to have a guy in your life such as Dale..i thought this was a great first post...i cant wait to see more!! Welcome again!!  ) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
Welcome to passions!!have fun. i know what it feels like to have the love of your life...and its unforgetable and beautiful.. hope to see more Ina |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
A wonderful tribute to this guy. A great read! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Great job on this, its a very good poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
This is nice. Thank you for sharing it. Hope to read more of your work. |
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