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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA 
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After so much time together I've loved you for so long How i tried so hard to make you happy but still you did me wrong I thought no matter what came our way we would always be But i thought wrong,it hurts,but now i see All the nights I ache and cry myself to sleep i wonder if your thinking about me It was great for as long as it would last but is seems like our love ended much too fast thanks for the laughs,thanks for the cries,thanks for the bittersweet memories The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Jenabou Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 215Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA |
. The world is like a mirror; frown at it, and it frowns at you. Smile and it smiles, too Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Oh how I can relate! Good job!  [This message has been edited by Suga_Baby (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey, great job. The whole idea of it was put into words very well. This deserves to be read by more people.... ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This definitly should be read by more people, it's a very good piece! I like how it's written, it's very clear. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was a nice poem. Kinda reminded me of Bittersweet symphony by the verve.......anyway..... good poem!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
Good poem. I have some friends who just went through a problem like this. "After so much time together, I've loved you for so long, How I tried so hard to make you happy, but you still did me wrong" This part should be their moto. Anyways, awesome poem. Looking forward to reading more. |
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