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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
-=Happiness=- are you happy? there with the rope around your neck, ever so tight... are you happy? you who cant be without attention, ever so lonely... are you happy? there in your room acompanied by you, ever so pesimistic... are you happy? are you really? what is happiness but love? what is love but trust? are you happy? cause I am, and i want you to know I love you... NOTE: Child of the Stars should know what im talking bout  < !signature--> San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... [This message has been edited by Morouxshi San (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really well-written piece. It's good to have friends that understand and love you. Thanks for sharing. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Felipe this was great......not one of your best but i did like this. Good job!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. Buddy this was great...I'm so glad you're happy ToOtElZ. ~Carly |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think this is good, I like it. I had a thought that I was going to type here, but now I've gone and forgot it. Don't you hate when that happens? Anyway, good job. "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
are you happy? cause I am, and i want you to know I love you... I love this!!!Really good work...I especially love that part that I posted...Keep up the good work!!! People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Thanx for the replies. dope it is not a very deep, extracomplicated, heavy processing poem because its not meant to be. sometimes you just have to say what you have to say without having to make the other person think about what you were really talking about, kinda like in my poem "Bait". San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Oh really San? I did not know that poems could be simple! OMG!!!!! What a concept! haha....anyway .......Dreams are a wakeful state for the senses....i agree on that one bud......but i still believe a coma is what i said in history class.....so ha! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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