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A word of silence
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A word of silence |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Come my friends one more hour, Another day to feel the power, Now I tell of things forgotten, Of people with no heart that are sour and rotten, So give me now my daily bread, Push me further until I'm ahead, Or forget about me shun me until i'm dead, So here me world with in this hour, Pray to God for the power, So here my world, Take a knee, Watch me open my heart my love until I bleed, Join me now to pray for your defience, Close my eyes seek God with a word of silence |
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chic Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 245yellville, Ar, U.S. |
Yet another great poem from the jayster  "Life is a game and we have to play, but in the end...we all die."-by me! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one is very well done, it's really great "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Good one!!! You have a way with the words. Keep it up. You did a terrific job on this one. People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is great. Shows your devotion to God! Great job. I liked this very much!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Devotion to God is always good! This is a very well-written piece. I love the way it flows. Thanks for sharing!"Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Greeneyes617 Member
since 2000-11-22
Posts 329Arkansas |
WAY TO GO BRO! Awesome poem, like usual. Keep it up!  |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey. I really liked this one, it had this wonderful flow put together with a good meaning. Great job. ~Carly |
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TearsOfPearls Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 322Vereeniging, South-Africa |
Wow...I have been missing out...man have I missed this place. Thanks for that wonderful poem, very well written and very true. Thank you or that one Waves...amazing hey? Wind blowing over smoothe ocean water creates shear. The longer the wind blows, and the futher the fetch, the more energy gets tr |
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tq_99 Junior Member
since 2000-11-14
Posts 45Las Vegas, NM, US |
Very nice poem, great show of your devotion to god, keep up the GREAT work! - tq_99 "Some say a rich man has it all but if he has no friends he is nothing" |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
Thanks every simply I just open my heart ans slap-stick on screen or one paper whats in my heart |
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