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All I Need Is The Love From Your Heart :)
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All I Need Is The Love From Your Heart :) |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI 
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All I Need Is The Love From Your Heart. 11/26/00 You are that one person in my life, That all i need is the love from your heart, Its all ill ever need for eternity, When I have that I will never look back, I will never look back to the bad times we’ve had, The times when you thought I did something bad, The times when you slapped my hand, But right now all I get is your voice, Your voice so loud so painful and so hurtful, All I get now is you constantly screaming at me, What will have to happen to me before you come out and be free? I want to know this right now, Are you willing to accept that yes, you have a son? Will you let me come into your life, Instead of constantly blocking the light. I love you, And that is true, But I need is for you to help me, IM in my final years to be by your side, Cant you accept me and help me the last few years, I am planning on going to college someday, You’ll be very suprised when I leave you side, I look into your eyes and guess what, You have no belief in me. I love you mom, Take my hand walk me down the road, Dont let me go without saying goodbye, Dont let me be, Always be there for me, And I will be the son of your dreams. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Branden this was a sweet poem. I surely hope that your mom does comply and give her son (you) what he needs most in his life, her love. Best wishes........good poem.....yea yea  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
branden726: This poem is one that pulls on the heart strings a bit. No matter what your mother does to you, remember that one day she will have to come into the light and realise that she does have a son and you are making her proud now but she just doesn't realise it. Keep your chin up ok.  ~AF~ "Poetry is the language in which man explores his own amazement." Christopher Fry |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
Branden~ This is good. Why dont you give it to her though???Let her know how you are feeling... People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
It doesn't sound like things are going so great. You should know that things probably won't immediately get better, but if you try to get your mother to improve your relationship then in time it will get better. That's just my thoughts though, and heck, what do I know!?! Nice job on the poem "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Sorry for my absence yetsterday i was sick so i wasnt able to answer any reply's but the reason i dont give it to my mom is because im afraid she'll reject it which i dont want at all. I am just so afraid i mean shes never here always working and when she is here she does nothing but screams at me. well i g2g buh bye "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
branden- this is so beautiful and so sweet. any mother should be so happy and proud to have a son who loves her so much. i know that it's often very scarey letting the people you love the most know exactly how you feel, and rejection is a very painful thing to face. Just remember though, that sometimes the best thing you can do is face your fears, and let your true feelings be known. When your fears control you, often times you end up missing out on something very special. Whatever you decide to do, just remember that we love you, and I hope things get better with your mother soon. She really is quite a lucky lady. hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
A mother is supposed to be there...to love you no matter what. Help you out when you need it. This is completely unfair that your mother is acting so immaturely. I hope one day you two can live together peacefully, and perhaps with love in your hearts for one another. Good luck. xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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branden726
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
THANK YOU JENN, you know exactly how i feel. This is what i tryed to express here. And im really glad someone hit it right on the nose. "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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