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Fly Soup Delight |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico 
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NOTE: I'm typing here cuz this poem is as short as they come......so yea.....here ya go! Fly Soup Delight: Swatted fly falling down. Dying slowly with a frown. Simple sage gone to waste. In my soup, the bitter taste.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Dopey_Dope, Short yes, but left a lasting smile on my face, thank you  Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
you know the story about the lady who swalloed a fly then i cat(i think) well in reminds of this....its very kool. It brightened my not so bright day. thanks! Regina |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love the title of this, it's kinda funny  The poem is in fact short as you pointed out, but it's good."Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
um.. ew? lol That was really cute, thanks for posting it!! with the unknown comes no expectations in this i find my peace |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dopey- LOL...i like this... it's really cute and fun.. don't think i'll be having soup for dinner tonight though..lol. *smiles*, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Dopey, Short-yes,Strange-As always, but it left me laughing with the rest of my office looking at me like I was weird. Very Cool Jon |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Hey there. This was weawy koo, I liked it a lots. Tootelzzz! Home is where the heart goes when it needs a band-aid. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
you at a fly you sick man!!. J/k Good oem my friend SHORT but good Love is pure in it's top form, But with out romance love is not born |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
man, I really hate it when the that happens. But my mom always said "Don't waste food" I enjoyed this IsGona "Every body has their destiny... I'LL CHOOSE MY OWN ~Hatebreed~ |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Glad you all liked. Anyway i'm having HUGE problems with my connections. This is the reason why I haven't replied to all of your poems people. Terribly sorry but once things get set i'll reply to every single one. I'm trying my best to get to at least one post (literally 10mins to get to ONE) so i don't form a commotion like i did in my catch-up stage last week.....Hope this won't be a bother to any of you. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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