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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada 
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Lust is not what angels feel, and I am a darling angel love is only what angels feels then if so, I am no longer an angel for I feel death and I feel sorrow Lust is what boys feel for girls like me crulety is what those boys feel when angels like me shoot them down but angels only feel love, not lust Little devils feel lust and seduction temptation by their sides angels only have the love of G-d little devils have the lust of young men and women A raging war is being fought but neither of them are winning for I am GOD! Regina i dont think that one made to much sense... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was odd. hehehe but i did like it. The ending was powerful. Another good one regina!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
This one was a little messed up, but who says poems have to make sense?!? I think it's pretty neat, nice job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
I thought that this one made perfect sense. And it was really good!!!Keep it up... And I loved the ending!!!< !signature--> People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts. [This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
It was a little to odd for me, actually it kinda creeped me out....but who cares....we kinda had to write these "quic writes" for english using certain words.....so it had a hard time forming....oh well. Thank you for replying to my poems it means a great deal to me....thats why im gonna try harder to reply to everyones poems... Regina akaina |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Yes this was odd, but in the best sense of the word. Very interesting...made me think. I like that. I'm beginning to wonder if you've ever written anything that isn't good... Another great one hun  SMILE Kristin ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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