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Ina
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

0 posted 2000-11-26 03:27 PM


Lust is not what angels
feel, and I am a darling angel
love is only what angels feels
then if so, I am no longer an
angel
for I feel death and I feel
sorrow
Lust is what boys feel for
girls like me
crulety is what those boys feel
when angels like me shoot them down
but angels only feel love, not lust
Little devils feel lust and seduction
temptation by their sides
angels only have the love of G-d
little devils have the lust
of young men and women
A raging war is being fought
but neither of them are winning
for I am GOD!
Regina

i dont think that one made to much sense...

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Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
1 posted 2000-11-26 04:46 PM


This was odd. hehehe but i did like it. The ending was powerful. Another good one regina!



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Lakewalker
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since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people
2 posted 2000-11-27 02:51 PM


This one was a little messed up, but who says poems have to make sense?!?  I think it's pretty neat, nice job

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Erin
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since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527
~Chicago~
3 posted 2000-11-27 03:38 PM


I thought that this one made perfect sense. And it was really good!!!Keep it up...

And I loved the ending!!!
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People leave our lives as quickly as they come, but the ones that mean something leave footprints in our hearts.

[This message has been edited by ERIN (edited 11-27-2000).]

Ina
Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada
4 posted 2000-11-27 05:33 PM


It was a little to odd for me, actually it kinda creeped me out....but who cares....we kinda had to write these "quic writes" for english using certain words.....so it had a hard time forming....oh well. Thank you for replying to my poems it means a great deal to me....thats why im gonna try harder to reply to everyones poems...
Regina
akaina

Kandi
Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell
5 posted 2000-11-27 05:46 PM


Yes this was odd, but in the best sense of the word. Very interesting...made me think. I like that. I'm beginning to wonder if you've ever written anything that isn't good...
Another great one hun  
SMILE
Kristin


~*Won't you come and hold my hand?
This world has taken me as far as it can...
without your smile.~*

~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong,

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