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Jacman
Member

since 2000-06-27

Posts 291
Dwight Il, US

0 posted 2000-06-30 11:06 AM

Visions of a time when things were better;
I go through my days in constant rememberance.
Every night in bitter sweet slumber,
free from the days encumberments.
I imagine a world full of tomorrows,
and sweet memories of yesterday.
You and I are there.
A great multitude of two.
We share the night in inseperable closeness.
Your heart and mine beat in complicated rythm.
Our minds are one in the same.
I reach for you as the dawn is breaking.
I am alone...the grandeure is gone,
and I must face today.

Jeremy Halstead
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 569
Morris, Ill. U.S.A

1 posted 2000-06-30 05:20 PM

This, I believe, was my favorite piece of your's that I've ever read....maybe You, probably this one. I'm glad you posted it. I hope the fish are biting...you deserve mad props for this one.

Jeremy

"Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade."

Isabel Galaxia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2000-06-30 08:25 PM

Wow, that was really good. Why didn't you submit that one? Keep up the writing
Bel

StarPryncess17
Senior Member

since 2000-05-31

Posts 932
Colorado

3 posted 2000-06-30 09:08 PM

Nicely written my friend! Your words seem to flow so easily (and if not you sure as hell make it seem like they do!

) They are very soothing. Keep up the writing! I love it!! It's all great!! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~

~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~
~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

4 posted 2000-07-01 02:56 AM

very very great piece. i enjoyed this very much. i hope to see more of your work real soon.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-19 08:11 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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