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My Heart
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My Heart |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
So many promises that you have soaked into my brain Now have left me with nothing but pain Don't you even care? You don't understand the pain that I have to bare Pain of heartbreak Next time, my heart, I won't let you take It's wrong to take a person's heart And tear it all apart I should have taken more care Instead I let my heart hang by a hair I was too blind to see Just what you were doing to me Wish you knew how I felt And all the pain that I've been dealt Just please try to understand And instead of my heart, take my hand |
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LIL.MAMA Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 32 |
THAT WAS GREAT YOU GO GIRL HOPE TO SEE MORE |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i hope you lose this loser real soon. and hey i would take your heart and mend it back together thread by thread so each part is healed to a T so you never have to worry about it to again bleed. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Erin Member Elite
since 2000-06-15
Posts 2527~Chicago~ |
well this is a very nice poem...but what i have realized that some guys that i have been with only used me to see how far they can get me...and now i wont even trust my boyfriend after being with him for 4 months...just dont get to close so in the end you wont feel the pain you felt before... ~IF YOU WANT SOMETHING VERY BADLY~SET IT FREE~IF IT COMES BACK TO YOU~ITS YOURS FOREVER~IF IT DOESNT IT WAS NEVER YOURS TO BEGIN WITH~ |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Its too much pain in your poem...take care Sincerely A_L |
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Jeremy Halstead Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 569Morris, Ill. U.S.A |
Hey kid...well...the only thing you can do is salvage what's left of your spirit and learn from what happened. I could really, really feel the dispair in every line of that poem...I've written many just like it. You did an excellent job conveying the level of deppresion you were feeling; although we both know that's something you could never completely express. Jeremy D. Halstead "Time is the matter, and in a matter of that all wounds will heal and all scars shall fade." |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Thanks everyone for your replys. It really means a bunch to me! Jeremiah, you are so sweet. Within you I lose myself. Without you I find myself wanting to become lost again. -unkown- |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Hon, I'm so sorry. I know exactly what this feels like... having your heart broken over and over again until it feels like it's crushed into powder. But it isn't truely broken until you give up on yourself and stop looking for the right one. Don't stop looking... "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Hey, that was good, and really sad. I understand some of how you feel, and I hope that you can get completely over that guy soon. It sounds like he was a jerk and a waste of time, he probably didn't deserve you. Good luck! Bel |
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StarPryncess17 Senior Member
since 2000-05-31
Posts 932Colorado |
oh my dear friend *sigh* I know how you feel and I know that eventhough it seems like your heart is never going to heal, I know that with time everything heals...Just remember that there are many guys out there that will hurt you. So when it does heal, just proceed with caution in the next relationship you endure. Just know that even though you have been hurt and you have a hard time trusting, you can't hold you new love to the same standards and until he gives you a reason to believe he's going to hurt you, give him a chance. Don't let your trust issues from the past be an issue in your next relationship! Best of luck my dear!! Keep your head up! Love Always~*~Jessica~*~ ~*~Love is the product of our dicontentment with ourselves~*~ ~*~SMILE! It makes your butt shine!~*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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