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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Mom, what's wrong? How come we can't get along? This isn't fair You act like you don't even care What is wrong with me, Is there any good in me you see? What have I done that is so bad? You're never happy w/me always mad. Just beccause I moved out Doesn't mean you can sit there and pout Are you even happy I'm being taken care of And that I believe in the Lord above? Yes, I know I've made some mistakes in the past But those should have faded away fast You know, this is really sad Cause I can't have a good relationship w/ you Or my dad There is so much you are missing out on Just make me understand, mom You've never given me a compliment Or ask me how my day went Even though you've hurt me And my grandparents, you don't care to see Just know that God's watching over you And that I love you too ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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branden726 
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
Im so glad im the first to reply to this because i feel the same exact way about my mom except i havent moved out i still live here at home but not once since maybe i was like 5 have i hugged or kissed my mom. and well thats just really really sad. Im 15 now and it wasnt untill i ended up in the hospital because i was having some troubles that my mom actually gave me a hug and told me she loved me......GREAT POEM!!!!!!!! "i just love when you bring your whole crew because its just a bigger piece of cake for me to chew threw" |
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Nikkisweet Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 183Tx, Dallas |
Hey. Thanx for replying to my poem. Yea, my mom and I are having a lot of trouble with our relationship. Hope it gets better with your mom too...also, I'm 15! If you have aol, my screen name is moodyblues4 if u ever want to talk and e-mail me! ~Writing is filling up your soul with words~ --Me |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I think you did a great job of getting your feelings out with this one, it's very good. The end of this was great, showing that you love her even though she might not show it towards you. That shows some major character. Nicely done  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Another 15 year old here! I also don't have a good relationship with my mother, so I can really relate to this piece. The only advice I can offer is to never give up. You only have one mother, good or bad, and you should try to get along with her... and you should always love her. Thanks for posting. "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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vix616 Junior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 22 |
I really like ur poem, and am hoping to write one about the same sort of situation - don't want to give too much away! I understand how u feel and am also 15 and feel the same way sometimes but im sure your mum will come to her senses and realise how lucky she is to have u.. dont give up luv vicki.xx  |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
Hey chick~ Well honestly I cant relate to this, because my mom and i are so close and we always have been. She's my bestfriend I tell her stuff i probably shouldnt because shes my mom, but i dont care, she trusts me and she gives good advice so it works for me. But i hope things work out XoXo's ~!*DQ*!~ "A true friend can see the truth and pain in your eyes, even when you're fooling everyone else" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Well i can't relate.......not in any sense whatsoever to this poem. BUt it was great........i felt the pain in this one. tons of emotion. Good luck with the future!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Well, I kinda go with Dopey on this one. I can't really relate. I've always had a decent relationship with my mom, occasional rough spots, but we're good. I'm not 15 anymore.... I kinda feel outa the loop on this whole thing, but this is good writing! xoxo Jenn "Guess I'm not smart, I let you un-nerve me, I let you control me; afraid the truth would hurt me, when it's you that hurts me more." TLC |
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